Reflection on my Commercial

   This video advertisment was so fun! I thought that our commercial was funny, creative, and very convincing. I thought that I was actually pretty good at persuading and discussing the product. I know that I could really improve on video editing, making it less humorous, and work on special effects. I would like to use anecdotes in my persuasive writing and statistics. Statistics will make the commercial more convincing. My favorite part would have to be the part where we drank the soda. I usually don't drink a lot of soda, and it was refreshing. I loved that we had to film that scene over and over again. I plan to speak louder and maybe show more expression. I learned that I am really good with a fake accent, I can act as different characters, and I can negotiate very well!My writing mentors are Rick Riordan and Elizabeth Eulberg. Readers will see the cleverness from Rick Riordan and the proper writing from Elizabeth Eulberg. This was obviously the best part oof the unit!